Example Edits
Below, you'll find some screenshots of actual work I've done for my real-life clients ... all of whom are currently published authors. You'll see examples of the type of feedback (and hype) I provide. It's honest, it's detailed, it's a little goofy, and it's always aimed at being kind and constructive.
Example 1: The Wingbreaker
I worked with Megan Mossgrove to deliver high-level feedback on everything from plot and pacing to seeing and worldbuilding to character development and arcs.
Example 2: A Broken Ember
I worked with Stephanie Beverley on this epic high fantasy to improve plot, pacing, worldbuilding, character and romance development, and more.
Example 3: How the Stars Fall
I worked with Sarah on both her first and second romantasy novels to develop the plot and worldbuilding and improve romantic elements such as character development and arcs.
